Thứ Hai, 12 tháng 4, 2010

Is Children Behavior Better Than It Was Years Ago?

Children behavior is one of the hottest issues that is dicussing in many forums on Internet today. In recent years, we always hear about bad attitude of children in public places and school. With the trend of society development, children today is cared by their family sufficiently. Because they have good life condition, they do not worry about material any longer. They only concentrate on studying, but they also become spoilt if their parents do not concern a lot. I think children behavior is not better than it was years ago.
Children behavior today is violent. Advances in technology and the transformation of the education system make children spoiled. For example, children is easy to contact with game online, so they learn and imitate with a lot of violent actions. Although Internet helps children very much in studying, it is also harmful to children behavior. In recent years, the rate of children behavior is more and more increased. They are willing to kill anyone who wounds their self-esteem. Moreover, there are not as many rules and parents are not strict as they used to be. Children think they can do whatever they want, and they do not obey their parents. They can tell lie to gather with their friends to hit each other. They are willing to use fist to solve problems without thinking about consequences. I used to hear about a crime that was caused by a 16 year olds student in Dong Nai last month. Because of small conflict with friend, he used a knife to kill his friend at classroom. That stab made his friend die immediately. This is one of violences that causes by children. We must admit that children today are very active. However, they also imitate quickly with something wrong.
Children have more bad habits than it was years ago. One of bad habits of children today is using bad language. They can speak whenever they want, and they do not pay attention to the feeling of other people. Not only do they speak with profanities, they also have bad actions with any people. For instance, when someone bump them by accident, they will lash out contantly. In addition, early smoking and drinking are bad habits of childrent today. We can not find a teenage without smoking and drinking. Because of lack discipline of their family, they can spend time on wasteful things. They do not focus on studying. We can not deny that children study very well. However, this is in some special cases. Children will learn bad things if they are not instructed by parents.
Some people may think that children behavior is better than it was years ago. They receive a lot of achievement in many fields, so they will broaden knowledge and have good relationship with other people. With the development of life condition, they can be cared by their parents, and they also give parents’ education. However, the rate of children is given the full care of parents is very low. Their parents just support money for their children and do not worry about studying or problems of their children. The lack of love of their parents also spoils children. Parents do not spend enough time to talk and help children with solving problems. Nowadays, parents are too busy to concern their chidren that makes children today is not good.
Children behavior today becomes worse. This statement expresses through some facts and experiences that our society are worrying. Children is the future of country, so if children behavior is worse, they will also make country worse. If their parents take care of them fully, children will be protected from bad behavior below. It is definitely high time to pay attention to children behavior today.

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